Comments on: Holding it http://100proofstories.com/2008/08/28/holding-it/ small, intoxicating stories Sat, 03 Dec 2011 17:45:01 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: inadvertentgardener http://100proofstories.com/2008/08/28/holding-it/#comment-272 Fri, 29 Aug 2008 04:07:21 +0000 http://100proof.wordpress.com/?p=168#comment-272 Matt, Word had it at 99, and WordPress had it at 97…hence the error. Give it a recount, though…I think you’ll find it’s OK now.

]]> By: Matt http://100proofstories.com/2008/08/28/holding-it/#comment-271 Fri, 29 Aug 2008 03:49:24 +0000 http://100proof.wordpress.com/?p=168#comment-271 I demand a rewrite! I’ve never seen over 100 words before….

I wouldn’t drop “ahead of them” though; it might change the meaning….

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